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AUGH, TONY STARK <3 <3 <3 Such a nervous little cutie. and BRUCE oh my gosh. I love your writings so much! <3

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AUGH, TONY STARK <3 <3 <3 Such a nervous little cutie. and BRUCE oh my gosh. I love your writings so much! <3

Aughhh thanks so much :3 I think I want to do some more superhero ones because I'm big on both MARVEL and DC but majority MARVEL :) Especially with this new Captain America movie that's just been released >:D

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These are all so brilliant, you are very talented!

So glad you think so :D If you ever have any request, feel free to drop 'em by me!

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Hey could you do another Beatles one with John? XP (possibly with the prompt "Shut Up"?) (Sorry I'm not in much fandoms lol)

I'm so sorry, I feel bad! For some reason, I just didn't see this! Of course I can :)

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For SneezyHarrison99, I hope you like it dear! biggrin.png It takes place in Hamburg around like 1960 or 1961 in the Indra Club.

22. "Shut Up, Will You Please?"

Fandom: The Beatles

Characters/Pairings: John Lennon, Paul McCartney

Prompt: Shut Up

Disclaimer: I don't own the previously mentioned fandom, nor any of it's characters, perhaps because they're actual people?

"HurESHHHHOO!" John sneezed harshly into his hands, then grimaced, waiting for Paul to snap at him. They were forced to share a bed, or a cot really, because conditions were so bad in the club. The Beatles were sleeping in the cinema storeroom, which was directly behind the actual cinema. The nights were quite noisy and any bit of sleep was priceless. George and Ringo were already out like lights but John had kept Paul up with his constant snivelling. He'd somehow managed to catch a cold in the freezing storeroom temperatures. Imagine that.

"Ehhh! Ah! HARRTSCHHH!" He rubbed his tickly nose with the back of his wrist, triggering another sneeze that shook their tiny sleeping arrangements. "ATSSCHH!"

"Oh..." Paul moaned sleepily. "Will you please shut up already?"

"Sorry, Bacca. I didn'd bean to wake you ub."

"I never got the change to go to sleep." Paul turned over to face John's back. "Are you okay?"

"Dever been-- EKSSHHHT! Bedder." John's shoulders shook with the force of the sneeze and Paul felt the cot shake.

"You're shakin' like a leaf."

"Sorry."

Paul bit his lip. "No, I mean, that's not normal."

"I kdow hahhh..." He sniffled and continued. "I kdow thad. Id's bloody freezin' id here."

"You wanna wear my jacket? Wearing that and being under these sheets should keep you somewhat warm."

"ERSHHHH! Okay, thags." John watched Paul wriggle out of his leather jacket and put it around John's shoulders.

"Get some sleep, okay?"

"Huh... hah! HASSSHHOO!"

"Bless, mate."

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Oh my goodness :drool: I say it every time and I will say it again, your writing is simply fantastic, and I die every time <3

If you could do a Davy Jones one, or a Ringo Starr one, that'd be really cool. ^^

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GAAAHHH I love it! Thank you so much! I noticed a significant shortage of John sneezing in fanfics. You've made my day! :clapping2:

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--!!!!

I wasn't expecting the drabbles I saw when I entered this thread so I was pleasantly surprised when I saw Star Trek and Avengers drabbles

and they are so cute my goodness. <3

I'd love to see more Star Trek if you wouldn't mind?

I don't mind either TOS or Reboot, and don't really mind which character/s, though my favourites are Kirk, Spock, McCoy, and Chekov. >//W//>

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Oh my goodness drool.gif I say it every time and I will say it again, your writing is simply fantastic, and I die every time <3

If you could do a Davy Jones one, or a Ringo Starr one, that'd be really cool. ^^

I will try to do both, but I'll do Ringo first ;) YAY!

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GAAAHHH I love it! Thank you so much! I noticed a significant shortage of John sneezing in fanfics. You've made my day! clapping.gif

I'm so glad you liked it man! :D It's nice to be able to make someone's day!

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I wasn't expecting the drabbles I saw when I entered this thread so I was pleasantly surprised when I saw Star Trek and Avengers drabbles

and they are so cute my goodness. <3

I'd love to see more Star Trek if you wouldn't mind?

I don't mind either TOS or Reboot, and don't really mind which character/s, though my favourites are Kirk, Spock, McCoy, and Chekov. >//W//>

Oh my goshhh! :D I will totally write more Star Trek! This fantastic I'm actually getting comments and requests and stuff :3 So awesome! I love Chekov!! uwu

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23. "A Ticket to Ride"

Fandom: The Beatles

Characters/Pairings: Ringo Starr, Paul McCartney, George Harrison, John Lennon

Prompt: Violent

Disclaimer: I don't own the previously mentioned fandom, nor any of it's characters, perhaps because they're actual people?

The Beatles were in the middle of doing a run through of "Ticket to Ride" and Ringo was desperately fighting a sneeze. This was their third take already and he really didn't want to mess this one up.

"She's got a ticket to ride. She's got a ticket to ri-hi-hide. She's got a ticket to ride... but she don't care!" John sang into the mic, squeezing his eyes shut. "I don't know why she's ridin' so high. She oughtta think twice, she oughtta do right by me!"

Ringo wrinkled his nose, trying to keep the beat steady as John hammered on.

"Before she gets to sayin' goodbye--"

"Heh-EHSHHOOO!" RIngo turned his head and sneezed violently, elbow accidentally clashing with the symbols and creating quite a racket. "HURESHHOOO!"

"Bless!" George nodded in his direction.

John clapped his hands. "Christ! That was a big one. Or ones, might I add."

"Sorry." Ringo muttered, looking slightly embarrassed. "Me nose is ticklin'. I dunno wh-why." He rubbed it furiously.

"It's because of that nose of yours. It's too susceptible of irritants!" John pointed out, earning an eye roll from Paul. "Ignore him."

"B-but Ehk-SHOOOO!" He sniffed miserably. "He's prolly right."

George shook his head, bangs swishing in front of his eyes. "Nah, cold's been goin' around, I think."

Ringo's lip trembled. "Oh... gr-grah... greatASHHHOOO!" He groaned. "I'b goig to blow by dose." The young man got up, sneezing as he exited the studio.

"Poor lad..." Paul said. "I hope he's not getting sick."

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1 - Kink | 2 - Science Fiction | 3 - Frightened | 4 - Fake | 5 - Pencil | 6 - Squint | 7 - Misplaced | 8 – Joy | 9 - Touched | 10 – Cough | 11 – Hot/Cold | 12 – Sin | 13 – Care | 14 – Frail | 15 – The End | 16 – Three | 17 – Never | 18 – Midnight | 19 – Promise | 20 – Fight | 21 – Pollen | 22 – Embarrassment | 23 – Alcohol | 24 – Mask | 25 – Mistake | 26 – Suspicion | 27 – Disagreement | 28 – Assignment | 29 – Purple | 30 – June | 31 – Calculating | 32 – Fall | 33 – Cry | 34 – Relief | 35 – Breath | 36 – Miserable | 37 – Chocolate | 38 – Violent | 39 – Muffle | 40 – Swift | 41 – Run | 42 – Poison | 43 – Contagion | 44 – Tissue | 45 – Sore | 46 – Enraptured | 47 – Wary | 48 – Pathetic | 49 – Sweat | 50 – Gentle | 51 – Milk | 52 – Ravenous | 53 – Blanket | 54 – Needles | 55 - Sports | 56 - Ruin | 57 - Lovely | 58 - Hospital | 59 - Annoying | 60 - Mother | 61 - Bike | 62 - Idiot | 63 - Puppy | 64 - Control | 65 - Unfair | 66 - Similarities | 67 - Raincoat | 68 - Worship | 69 - Attitude | 70 - Fuck | 71 - Confession | 72 - Floor | 73 - Remedy | 74 - Don’t | 75 - Ego | 76 - Heartless | 77 - Lullaby | 78 - Secret | 79 - Shut Up | 80 - Music | 81 - Grunge | 82 - Solitude | 83 - Magic | 84 - Dirty | 85 - City | 86 - Teacher | 87 - Sky | 88 - Hypocrite | 89 - Tattoo | 90 - Money | 91 - Childhood | 92 - Goodbye | 93 - Victory | 94 - Weather | 95 - Photo | 96 - Rage | 97 - Internet | 98 - Fashion | 99 - Favour | 100 - Lazy | 101 - Airplane

AN - This is a weird one, but in The Monkees episdoe, "Monkee See, Monkee Die" (I think) there was a haunted house they had to stay in, so in this one, I'm just going to make them stay in the haunted house but there's a werewolf, which Davy is allergic to... random, I know. Don't ask me how I came up with this, Meg! LOL! Sorry if it sucks!

24. "What Are the Odds?"

Fandom: The Monkees

Characters/Pairings: Davy Johnes, Michael Nesmith, Micky Dolenz, Peter Tork

Prompt: Rage

Disclaimer: I don't own the previously mentioned fandom, nor any of it's characters, perhaps because they're actual people?

"RAAHHHRRR!" The werewolf roared loudly and Peter sqeaked. "It's back!"

"Ahh... Ahhh! CHOO!" Davy sneezed into his hands.

"Would you quit that?" Mike snapped and grabbed Davy's wrist. "We've gotta go, now!"

"I can't help that I'm huh! Ahh... A-allergic to HASSSSHHOO! Werewolves! What are the o-odds?"

Peter stopped in the middle of the hallway. "Well, if the odds of actually meeting a werewolf are--"

"Pete, c'mon!" Micky yelled.

The boys sprinted down the hall, Davy sniffling the whole way. Mike ducked into an abandoned room and Micky slammed the door behind them. "Quick, into the closet!"

"It's a small closet." Peter noted, pulling his knees up to his chest and elbowing Mike in the stomach.

The Texan grunted. "Yeah, thanks for pointin' that out, Pete."

"Ehh..." Davy sniffed. "My nose still itches."

"It probably wouldn't be good if you sneezed."

They all heard the bedroom door outside creak and the boys froze. Mike raised a finger to his lips to silence them. As the werewolf neared the closet, Davy's breath began hitching.

"Ahh! HaH!"

Panicked, Mike whipped the wool hat off his head and held it over Davy's mouth and nose to muffle the sneezes.

"Chshhhh! CHSH! Hh'gntt!"

Peter patted Davy's back helpfully.

The werewolf growled, frustrated and left the room. As soon as they heard him do so, Mike removed the hat from his friend's face. As soon as he did, a volley of sneezes met them.

"HehCHHHOO! AtCHHOOO!"

"Bless you!" the three boys chorus and Davy rubbed his pink nose.

"Sorry 'bout that, fellas!"

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1 - Kink | 2 - Science Fiction | 3 - Frightened | 4 - Fake | 5 - Pencil | 6 - Squint | 7 - Misplaced | 8 – Joy | 9 - Touched | 10 – Cough | 11 – Hot/Cold | 12 – Sin | 13 – Care | 14 – Frail | 15 – The End | 16 – Three | 17 – Never | 18 – Midnight | 19 – Promise | 20 – Fight | 21 – Pollen | 22 – Embarrassment | 23 – Alcohol | 24 – Mask | 25 – Mistake | 26 – Suspicion | 27 – Disagreement | 28 – Assignment | 29 – Purple | 30 – June | 31 – Calculating | 32 – Fall | 33 – Cry | 34 – Relief | 35 – Breath | 36 – Miserable | 37 – Chocolate | 38 – Violent | 39 – Muffle | 40 – Swift | 41 – Run | 42 – Poison | 43 – Contagion | 44 – Tissue | 45 – Sore | 46 – Enraptured | 47 – Wary | 48 – Pathetic | 49 – Sweat | 50 – Gentle | 51 – Milk | 52 – Ravenous | 53 – Blanket | 54 – Needles | 55 - Sports | 56 - Ruin | 57 - Lovely | 58 - Hospital | 59 - Annoying | 60 - Mother | 61 - Bike | 62 - Idiot | 63 - Puppy | 64 - Control | 65 - Unfair | 66 - Similarities | 67 - Raincoat | 68 - Worship | 69 - Attitude | 70 - Fuck | 71 - Confession | 72 - Floor | 73 - Remedy | 74 - Don’t | 75 - Ego | 76 - Heartless | 77 - Lullaby | 78 - Secret | 79 - Shut Up | 80 - Music | 81 - Grunge | 82 - Solitude | 83 - Magic | 84 - Dirty | 85 - City | 86 - Teacher | 87 - Sky | 88 - Hypocrite | 89 - Tattoo | 90 - Money | 91 - Childhood | 92 - Goodbye | 93 - Victory | 94 - Weather | 95 - Photo | 96 - Rage | 97 - Internet | 98 - Fashion | 99 - Favour | 100 - Lazy | 101 - Airplane

25. "I Am Fine, Keptin"

Fandom: Star Trek (reboot)

Characters/Pairings: Pavel Chekov, Spock, Jim Kirk

Prompt: Similarities

Disclaimer: I don't own the previously mentioned fandom, nor any of it's characters.

Ensign Chekov did not like being the baby of the USS Enterprise. Seventeen years old or not, he wanted to be treated like an adult. So when he caught a cold, there was no way he was going to let that stop him do anything. He was an adult (or at least had similarities to that of an adult) and he could take care of himself, surely. But God, he had to sneeze, bad. His eyes were watering so much he could barely see the screen directly in front of him.

"Chekov," Kirk began, "could please put us on course for Kabrel I?"

"Yes s-sir!" The young man made the appropriate calculations and adjustments.

Sulu was watching and suddenly squinted at him. "Chekov are you... are you crying?"

"N-no. I am not." Still, he attempted in vain to blink away irritated tears.

Spock was at his side in an instant. "Interestingly enough, watering eyes are a sure sign of--"

Chekov promptly lost his battle. "Eh'shhhht! Heh'gnttt! Eshhhxxx!" He sneezed three times in rapid sucession.

"Whoa, bless you." Sulu said, in a state of shock. Chekov waved him off.

"No, no. That ees normal for me. I always s-sn-sneeze three times. Usually."

Spock raised an eyebrow. "Considering the chapped skin on your nose and your constant sniffling, I'd conclude you are being affected by the common cold."

"I am fine! Just eeehhhh... Hhiiih!"

Jim stood up and joined Spock. "Ensign?"

"Ehhk... hah!" He was still struggling with the sneeze, one finger under his quivering nostrils.

"Perhaps you should go to sick bay?" The Vulcan suggested.

Chekov, breath still hitching, managed to shake his head. "N-no, I don'd deed sig bey."

"It looks like your nose begs to differ." Sulu added lightly as Chekov's nostrils flared a final time.

"Tsshhh! EHTSHhhh! HahhhSHHhuhh!" He sniffled and looked blearily up at Captain Kirk.

"Sorry, Keptin."

Jim smirked. "For what? Sneezing?"

"Etishhh! Y-yes."

Jim placed a hand on his friend's shoulder. "Bless you. And head to sick bay. That's an order."

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Oh my goodness, Chekov! <3

Ugh so cute, this is amazing. Thank you so much!

Of course!! I'm just glad you liked it :D

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Oh my gosh, the Ringo one gave me butterflies ./////. So cute! and the Davy one was adorable, don't worry :wub:

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Oh my gosh, the Ringo one gave me butterflies ./////. So cute! and the Davy one was adorable, don't worry wub.png

Ahhh thanks! Glad you liked it! I was nervous to post haha!~

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1 - Kink | 2 - Science Fiction | 3 - Frightened | 4 - Fake | 5 - Pencil | 6 - Squint | 7 - Misplaced | 8 – Joy | 9 - Touched | 10 – Cough | 11 – Hot/Cold | 12 – Sin | 13 – Care | 14 – Frail | 15 – The End | 16 – Three | 17 – Never | 18 – Midnight | 19 – Promise | 20 – Fight | 21 – Pollen | 22 – Embarrassment | 23 – Alcohol | 24 – Mask | 25 – Mistake | 26 – Suspicion | 27 – Disagreement | 28 – Assignment | 29 – Purple | 30 – June | 31 – Calculating | 32 – Fall | 33 – Cry | 34 – Relief | 35 – Breath | 36 – Miserable | 37 – Chocolate | 38 – Violent | 39 – Muffle | 40 – Swift | 41 – Run | 42 – Poison | 43 – Contagion | 44 – Tissue | 45 – Sore | 46 – Enraptured | 47 – Wary | 48 – Pathetic | 49 – Sweat | 50 – Gentle | 51 – Milk | 52 – Ravenous | 53 – Blanket | 54 – Needles | 55 - Sports | 56 - Ruin | 57 - Lovely | 58 - Hospital | 59 - Annoying | 60 - Mother | 61 - Bike | 62 - Idiot | 63 - Puppy | 64 - Control | 65 - Unfair | 66 - Similarities | 67 - Raincoat | 68 - Worship | 69 - Attitude | 70 - Fuck | 71 - Confession | 72 - Floor | 73 - Remedy | 74 - Don’t | 75 - Ego | 76 - Heartless | 77 - Lullaby | 78 - Secret | 79 - Shut Up | 80 - Music | 81 - Grunge | 82 - Solitude | 83 - Magic | 84 - Dirty | 85 - City | 86 - Teacher | 87 - Sky | 88 - Hypocrite | 89 - Tattoo | 90 - Money | 91 - Childhood | 92 - Goodbye | 93 - Victory | 94 - Weather | 95 - Photo | 96 - Rage | 97 - Internet | 98 - Fashion | 99 - Favour | 100 - Lazy | 101 - Airplane

26. "In a Dank Prison Cell"

Fandom: Thor

Characters/Pairings: Loki, Thor

Prompt: Ego

Disclaimer: I don't own the previously mentioned fandom, nor any of it's characters.

"Loki."

"Thor."

Well, this was awkward. Thor hadn't spoken to his brother in weeks since the incident. Since then, Loki had been locked up in the dungeons with the rest of the criminals. Thor stared at his brother's icy ices, the lingering smirk... was that the face of a traitor?

"You look... well." Thor was merely testing the waters.

"You look like you need a huh! Haircut." Loki steadied his voice and took a step closer to the glass. "Perhaps you can get the Lady S-sahhh... Sif to tr-trim it for you."

Although voice quivered, his face remained unchanged. Thor rolled his eyes. "Loki, enough with the trickery. I see through your magic."

Loki sighed heavily and blinked. "Suit yourself."

With a flash, the illusion disappeared and instead, Loki was leaning up against the harsh walls, rubbing his nose miserably. His hair was tangled with intricate knots and went well past his shoulders. Blood covered his hands and there were deep gouges in his arms. Aside from this, he obviously was quite ill.

Loki studied his brother's face carefully. "Would you rather me regenerate the illusion?"

Thor swallowed and rubbed the back of his neck. "Uh, no. I believe I'd rather see an image of reality than one of nonsense."

"Th-this prison-cell-is-nonsense." Loki tumbled over the words in a rush to get them out. "Hh'hhnnggt!"

"You should not hold them in. It is bad for your health."

"I don't know Thor, I do fear dank cells are worse for my well-being, wouldn't you agree?" He sniffled and ran a long finger beneath his nose. "Ehhh! Hiiihhh... Damn! I truly despise when that hahhh... h-happens!"

Thor shuffled his feet. "I can arrange an audience with Father to--"

His brother sucked in a quick breath before ducking into the crook of his elbow. "Ggnnnxxt! Eh... hehh! Heh'gnnt! KsSHHH!"

Three tickly sneezes later and Loki is sniffling desperately behind his wrist, trying to preserve what little ego he has left.

"Bless you." Thor mentioned as casually as he could.

Loki snorted, then immediately regretted it. "Practising some of those ehh... Earth habits for your little Earthling fr-friend? Hah'gnxxt!" He punctuated his sentence with a barely stifled sneeze.

"Yes." Thor was practically beaming.

"You st-stupid o-oaf..." Loki murmured, masssaging the bridge of his nose. "Hehh... Hiiiihh! Hah'ISHHHH!"

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I think that's the first Loki drabble I've ever read, and that said, it WAS BEAUTIFUL. :') Um, do you think you can do something with Captain America? You don't have to...

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